This is the art I received for my main character.

In a space-age afterlife where your body (and some relevant aspects of your mind) is determined by what your psyche wants, Chris Foster becomes a very young child again so they can deal with trauma. Here they choose the name “Solemn” and embark on their personal journey of self-discovery, mental health tools, and what it means to have real, loving family for the first time.

But when political activists kill off the seraphs (the afterlife’s demigod social workers and keepers of the peace) it is up to Solemn— who for non-convoluted reasons has become a seraph themself— and their newfound family and others who will fight to restore the compassion and dignity of this afterlife.

My novel is in its third draft and it’s super rich and I love to talk about it any chance I get. Ask questions or offer to look at the public draft, please! 💙

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      8 months ago

      Why? Because – and while I applaud you paying someone to do the art – the art reminded me of Nazi Propaganda. I was saddened to see another idealized blonde haired, blue-eyed Jugend/baby getting elevated to special reigning status. Most of the world is dark haired and brown-eyed. Why give Nazis yet another piece of fiction to subtly push the zeitgeist into believing the abnormal caucus folk are better than the lower masses?

      Less related, but stylistically similar: https://germangirlinamerica.com/history-hummel-figurines/

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        8 months ago

        You know, I normally wouldn’t engage people like you, but all you’re doing is making me excited.


        List of some characters in my novel featuring an afterlife with everyone in it, in no particular order:

        Main: Chris Foster / Solemn Oliver. Born in Minnesota, a state which I live in

        Supporting: Chris’s social worker on Earth: African American male, lives in Minnesota


        Senna: Caucasian-looking female angel, “hair like the sun”, psychologist

        Ona: Asian-looking female angel, black hair, program coordinator

        Theeb: Middle-Eastern-looking male angel, black hair, attorney

        All three have stark white irisis, as seraphs do


        Main antagonist: Frank Callous: Caucasian male, born in 1840, fought for women’s rights in the US in 1870+. Is villain duo with his new wife


        Faraji: 11-year-old Tanzanian boy, on “orphan train” with Solemn

        Wai: 4-year-old Chinese girl, on “orphan train” with Solemn

        Callum: 13-month-old Scottish boy, on “orphan train” with Solemn

        All three cared for gently by Ona on the trip, and she speaks to Wai in Mandarin and to Faraji in Swahili


        Main: Lu Montsely. Caucasian female, Chris’s foster mom, strawberry-blonde hair, born in a Southern state (like my parents)

        Tony Oliver: Caucasian husband of Lu

        Kelly Vargas: Caucasian, sister to Lu

        Alejandro Vargas: Mexican-American, husband of Kelly

        Main: Jessi Vargas: Mexican-American 19-year-old, snarky ass-kicker, daughter of Kelly & Alejandro


        Alistair: African American male, best friend of Jessi

        Zoey: Caucasian female, redhead, born male on Earth, best friend of Jessi

        Samuel Salgado: South American man (unknown country), runs pet store on Nemesis, interesting info about vice vs. choice


        Mitzi: German woman, caregiver for regressees at her foster home

        Nikolai: Russian caretaker at Mitzi’s home

        Ms. Zuri: African caregiver at Mitzi’s home

        “Princess”: European, (unknown country), Caucasian girl, 5-year-old regressee

        Kimimila, “Kimmy” for short. Native American girl, intellectual, 12-year-old regressee

        Brandon: Tanned probably-American boy, 10, regressee


        Émeric: French man, liaison for Solemn’s family

        Villagers of Yéva Nol: Many of them proto-humans, as early as 50k to 100k years old. Dark-skinned, smart and awesome

        Enki: One of the villagers of Yéva Nol, Mesopotamian, super charismatic

        Nila: Indian young woman who lives in Yéva Nol, and Jessi’s new romantic interest. Talks about the benefits of both individualistic vs. collectivist social thinking


        Solemn themself is asexual, aromantic, and agender/gender-curious.

        Zoey is MtF trans and is writing a book on the “joys of gradual transitioning” instead of getting the body you want the moment you are reincarnated

        Jessi is lesbian